From 1bcaa1b350c0e7d839416a84b4f1aa279b3f3cd2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: VinPropane Date: Sun, 24 May 2026 15:59:16 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] NEO-64: add code review document. --- docs/reviews/2026-05-24-NEO-64.md | 54 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ 1 file changed, 54 insertions(+) create mode 100644 docs/reviews/2026-05-24-NEO-64.md diff --git a/docs/reviews/2026-05-24-NEO-64.md b/docs/reviews/2026-05-24-NEO-64.md new file mode 100644 index 0000000..74fdb99 --- /dev/null +++ b/docs/reviews/2026-05-24-NEO-64.md @@ -0,0 +1,54 @@ +# Code review — NEO-64 gather telemetry hook sites + +**Date:** 2026-05-24 +**Scope:** Branch `NEO-64-e3m1-resource-gathered-gather-node-depleted-telemetry-hooks` · commits `f39d12a`–`847cda9` vs `origin/main` +**Base:** `origin/main` + +## Verdict + +**Approve with nits** + +## Summary + +NEO-64 adds **comment-only** E9.M1 telemetry hook anchors in **`GatherOperations.TryGather`** for future catalog events **`resource_gathered`** (every successful gather after inventory + XP + depletion commit) and **`gather_node_depleted`** (when that success drives **`remainingGathers`** to **0**, not on pre-gather **`node_depleted`** deny). The change follows NEO-49/NEO-56 precedent: **`TODO(E9.M1)`** markers, planned payload fields, no **`ILogger`** or ingest, engine-only placement (no duplicate hooks in **`InteractionApi`**). Docs close out Epic 3 Slice 2 / E3.M1 backlog (**Ready**). Risk is very low — no runtime behavior, wire contract, or test changes; **`remainingAfterGather`** local is a readability refactor only. + +## Documentation checked + +| Document | Result | +|----------|--------| +| [`docs/plans/NEO-64-implementation-plan.md`](../plans/NEO-64-implementation-plan.md) | **Matches** — comments-only, engine-only anchor, success-path timing, kickoff decisions (no interact deny hook, no ILogger), all planned file touches, acceptance checklist complete. | +| [`docs/plans/E3M1-prototype-backlog.md`](../plans/E3M1-prototype-backlog.md) | **Matches** — E3M1-08 checkboxes + landed note; Slice 2 backlog complete. Template line “interact deny branch if applicable” superseded by kickoff (engine-only) — no implementation conflict. | +| [`docs/decomposition/modules/E3_M1_ResourceNodeAndGatherLoop.md`](../decomposition/modules/E3_M1_ResourceNodeAndGatherLoop.md) | **Matches** — NEO-64 hook bullet, module **Ready**, gather orchestration authority unchanged. | +| [`docs/decomposition/modules/documentation_and_implementation_alignment.md`](../decomposition/modules/documentation_and_implementation_alignment.md) | **Matches** — E3.M1 row **Ready** with NEO-64 landed note; E3M1-01–E3M1-08 complete. | +| [`docs/decomposition/modules/module_dependency_register.md`](../decomposition/modules/module_dependency_register.md) | **Matches** — E3.M1 row **Ready**; **E3.M1 note** includes NEO-64 / E3M1-08. | +| [`docs/decomposition/epics/epic_03_crafting_economy.md`](../decomposition/epics/epic_03_crafting_economy.md) | **Matches** — Slice 2 vocabulary `resource_gathered`, `gather_node_depleted`. | +| [`docs/decomposition/modules/client_server_authority.md`](../decomposition/modules/client_server_authority.md) | **N/A** — no authority boundary change. | +| [`docs/manual-qa/NEO-64.md`](../manual-qa/NEO-64.md) | **Matches** — code-review checklist, regression command, optional Bruno sanity. | +| [`server/README.md`](../../server/README.md) | **Matches** — NEO-64 paragraph under gather engine (NEO-62): event names, timing, NEO-56 `item_created` cross-ref, manual QA + plan links. | + +Register/tracking: E3.M1 **Ready** and alignment row updates are appropriate — Slice 2 backlog is complete. + +## Blocking issues + +None. + +## Suggestions + +1. **Conditional structure for `gather_node_depleted` (optional)** — NEO-40 nests the **`level_up`** hook inside `if (nextLevel > prevLevel)`. Here **`gather_node_depleted`** documents “when **`remainingAfterGather == 0`**” but sits on the unconditional success path. Consider a brief commented guard (e.g. `// if (remainingAfterGather == 0) { … emit gather_node_depleted … }`) so E9.M1 wiring mirrors the **`level_up`** pattern and avoids accidental unconditional emit. Low priority — comment text is already explicit. + +2. **Backlog template wording (optional)** — E3M1-08 in [`E3M1-prototype-backlog.md`](../plans/E3M1-prototype-backlog.md) still lists “interact deny branch if applicable” in **In scope**; kickoff chose engine-only. A one-line “deny branch: out of scope (NEO-64 kickoff)” under E3M1-08 would reduce future misreads. + +## Nits + +- Nit: README NEO-64 content is a bold paragraph under **Gather engine (NEO-62)** rather than a separate `### Gather telemetry hooks (NEO-64)` heading with its own anchor; module doc links to `#gather-engine-neo-62` — acceptable, optional heading if you want parity with NEO-49’s dedicated README subsection. + +- Nit: **`gather_node_depleted`** comment block could repeat **`TODO(E9.M1): catalog emit`** on its own line (it does — same style as **`resource_gathered`**). No change needed. + +## Verification + +```bash +cd /home/don/neon-sprawl && dotnet test NeonSprawl.sln +# Passed! Failed: 0, Passed: 292 +``` + +Manual: walk [`docs/manual-qa/NEO-64.md`](../manual-qa/NEO-64.md) code-review checklist; optional Bruno `bruno/neon-sprawl-server/interaction/` against a running server to confirm gather behavior unchanged.